Monday, September 20, 2010

Poem 1


“Merry?-Go-Round”

from the depths of a soul
we shall never know
was the love that ran deep and True.
and time ran her course
but with brutal force
as Failure burned, a fire blue

again and again we go on and pretend
of our Vows unbroken and True

1 comment:

  1. very interesting that my post from days ago did not go through because it is not here. But I know exactly what you are talking about. You made the poem so constructive and appealing. Well I mean you didn't show how angry this situation made you. Mine made me angry but like I felt, you probably felt a sense of relief when you wrote this. very good and I'm proud of you and the next poem.... Yes you DID IT>>> YOU PREVAILED~~~

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