Ah! Let us rejoice The birth of a new voice Completeness, acceptance . . . ring the bell! Fore lost, fore so frail Shouting words of “Prevail!” A life that has just begun.
Jess, I like your poem! It gives me sense of a "NEW" life not just a new day. Another thing that I really like is that it's short but the message is powerful. A line that really called my attention was, "Completeness, acceptance . . . ring the bell!" because it's up to us to "ring the bell" and embrace the opportunity. I really enjoy reading your writing, and although neither you or I are fond of writing poetry, I feel your spirit in your writing and it's truly inspiring. Keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your work to come, how exciting! Awesome poems Jess. See you in class, Gloria
Jess,
ReplyDeleteI like your poem! It gives me sense of a "NEW" life not just a new day. Another thing that I really like is that it's short but the message is powerful. A line that really called my attention was, "Completeness, acceptance . . . ring the bell!" because it's up to us to "ring the bell" and embrace the opportunity. I really enjoy reading your writing, and although neither you or I are fond of writing poetry, I feel your spirit in your writing and it's truly inspiring. Keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your work to come, how exciting! Awesome poems Jess.
See you in class,
Gloria